Analysis of Eternal




I'll sleep when I die
Sleep when I die
Go out like Dad
Couldn't speak when he died
The look in his eyes
Like a newborn
Wishing for words
All the mistakes
Hindsight really is
20/20
So was the price
Of that glassine
Every ounce of hope
Extinguished
In a swift rush to the brain
Green light went flat
There was no more
Pain.


Scheme AABCDEFGHIJEKLMNOM
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 1111 1111 101111 01011 1010 1011 1001 1101 1 1101 111 100111 010 0011101 1111 1111 1
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 304
Words 64
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 254
Words per stanza (avg) 64
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Submitted on November 10, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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William Hernandez

My name is William J. Hernandez and I'm a poet from Buffalo, NY. I love all forms of art, and poetry is my favorite outlet. A lot of my poems deal with raw emotions, and feelings of inadequacy. I tap into my pain and let it flow. more…

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