Analysis of Eternal Delight



I bite my lip in passion throws,
as his hands lightly caress the canvas of my essence
and it pulsates through the heavens
erupting a gentle scream that echoes through the room.

My eyes see the delicate light of eternity in his mind.
His poetical nature speaks silently across my quivering thighs
Arousing the lust as I cry for more.
He takes me back to the heavens of love's sweet clouds
enchanting ambiance, I can touch the sky
and sweet sensations erupt as I feel the purity lick the desire of my soul.
He takes me to the heavens of wondrous delight.

With phenomenal prowess he takes me,
I am forever his and we are one.
His gentle breaths crash like tidal waves into my love-born sighs,
trickling the sweet perfume of ardor.
That sings harmoniously to the heavens
and our lover's cries approach the pinnacle of our eternal delight.


Scheme XXAX XBXXXXC XXBXAC
Poetic Form
Metre 11110101 11110010101110 0111010 100101110101 1110100110100011 111011000111001 0100111111 111110101111 01010011101 0101001111010010010111 111101011001 1010010111 1101010111 110111101011111 100101110 11010001010 01010101010011001001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 818
Words 150
Sentences 8
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 7, 6
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 223
Words per stanza (avg) 50
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Submitted on August 19, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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