Analysis of Fear's Whispered Ingenuity



It was All Hallow's Eve; a scary time,
bent-backed witches cackled paws into lives,
magical night wraps up delicate rhyme
while battered ghosts howl to wide-eyed captives.

Bent-backed witches cackled paws into lives;
full of fear's whispered ingenuity,
while battered ghosts howl to wide-eyed captives
trials and tribulations taste so nasty.

Full of fear's whispered ingenuity,
the children shivered excitement's language,
trials and tribulations taste so nasty
as blood stains a mummy's ancient bandage.

The children shivered excitement's language,
natural instincts crawling with maggots,
as blood stains a mummy's ancient bandage
vampires rise from traditional caskets.

Natural instincts crawling with maggots
whip up a feast in the old atmosphere,
vampires rise from traditional caskets
with teeth ready to become quite severe.

Whip up a feast in the old atmosphere;
blood and gut covered candy is sweet delight,
with teeth ready to become quite severe
werewolves spiral their laughter into fright.

Blood and gut covered candy is sweet delight,
magical night wraps up delicate rhyme,
werewolves spiral their laughter into fright,
it was All Hallow's Eve; a scary time.

The pantoum is a rare form of poetry similar to a villanelle. It is composed of a series of quatrains; the second and fourth lines of each stanza are repeated as the first and third lines of the next. This pattern continues for any number of stanzas, until the final stanza, which usually contains the first and third lines of the first stanza as its second and fourth lines. Often, the final stanza's fourth line is the poem's first, and the third line of the poem may or may not appear as the second line of the final stanza. Ideally, the meaning of lines shifts when they are repeated although the words remain exactly the same: this can be done by shifting punctuation, punning, or simply recontextualizing. The pantoum is originally Malayan and is adopted infrequently to English.


Scheme ABAB BCBC CDCE DFEF FGFG GHGH HAHA x
Poetic Form
Metre 111110101 111011011 1001111001 1101111110 111011011 1111000100 1101111110 1000101110 1111000100 01010110 1000101110 1110101010 01010110 1001010110 1110101010 1011010010 1001010110 110100110 1011010010 1110101101 110100110 10110101101 1110101101 110110011 10110101101 1001111001 110110011 111110101 01101111001001011101101011010011111010101010111011100101101011001010101100001010111011011100111001011110110011101011110110101101010010010111111010101010100111111100101110101101000010010100100110
Characters 1,930
Words 316
Sentences 14
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 55
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 199
Words per stanza (avg) 40
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Submitted on August 12, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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