Analysis of Feeling Freedom Focused
i'm your safe haven
the warmth you bathe in
come to me when you're starving
cause i've got what you're craving
feel free to come to me
feel free to escape reality
i'm where ever you want me to be
if only you believed in me..believe in me
i'm your personal paradise
should it entice
to the calm, cool and nice
isnt this nice?..yeah isnt this nice
no surprise..its all at a price
a simple roll of the dice
feel free to come to me
feel free to escape reality
i'm where ever you want me to be
if only you believed in me..believe in me
when you're caving and you're crumbling
you can't find the right words so you're mumbling
and you feel like you can't do nothing
you're fumbling and you're tumbling down..
then your body is suddenly numbing
and now you see the end is coming...
feel free to come to me
feel free to escape reality
i'm where ever you want me to be
if only you believed in me..believe in me
sweat and tears, dripping
out of fear, slipping
heart of mine, ripping
loss of hope, crippling
bottomless pit, i'm dipping
two sides of a coin, flipping
Scheme | xxaa BBBB cccccc BBBB aaaxaa BBBB aaaaaa |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11110 01110 1111110 1111110 111111 1110110 111011111 1101010101 1110010 1101 101101 111111 111101 0101101 111111 1110110 111011111 1101010101 111001100 11101111100 011111110 1100011001 1110110010 011101110 111111 1110110 111011111 1101010101 10110 11110 11110 111100 1001110 1110110 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,022 |
Words | 207 |
Sentences | 8 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 6, 4, 6, 4, 6 |
Lines Amount | 34 |
Letters per line (avg) | 24 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 116 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 29 |
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Submitted on September 27, 2013
Modified on March 05, 2023
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