Analysis of Friend in pain
Since; I heard that my friend has lost everything; I'm in pain
We were very, very, close friends for not any personal gain
Always helping each others; as both were in same train
We started drifting away from each other in a straight lane
He was living a lavish life with booming business with brain
Was in wholesale business running very well with his friend
I was happy; seeing prosperity with him; with a happy end
But I was not expecting a total loss being a man of brain
He was born rich; so I wanted him to continue prosperity chain
But who knows what turn life will take to put all of us in pain
Even my analysis; won't be able to find reason of failure; man
Since I heard collapse of his business; I am constantly in pain
See what a co-incidence; can't help since both are in same train
The day heard of; constantly thinking what happened to my friend
Believe me; this was unbearable; not ready to hear; being sane
As friend of lifetime; wish a speedy recovery of losses being sane
I wish; I could be with him at this difficult time of his life in pain
He is in need of support; and healing touches to overcome pain
I know as a brave man; will endeavor his best to embark on train
Pray to God; give courage to come out of situation a hope remain
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Poetic Form | Quatrain (80%) |
Metre | 1111111110101 1010101111101001 110110110011 110100111100011 111001011101011 1011010101111 11101001001110101 11110100101100111 111111101101001001 111111111111101 1010100111011101101 1110111101110001 110110011111011 011110010110111 01111010011011101 11111010010110101 111111111100111101 1101101010101101 11101110101110111 11111011110100101 |
Closest metre | Iambic octameter |
Characters | 1,233 |
Words | 241 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 49 |
Words per line (avg) | 12 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 197 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 48 |
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Submitted on September 26, 2013
Modified on March 05, 2023
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