Analysis of Geographic



You are a fleeting experience,
one that drifts away from me
like living fog on the riverbanks of my fingertips.
In the light of this beach bonfire
I can taste deeply the sweetness of your colors
and the salt of your skin.

If I held my hand outstretched in front of me
I could say that it marks the depth where my love exists.
From this distance I could see the curve of your cheek
meet the fold at the corner of your eyes.
I could use my finger to trace the gradient of your smile
like the slope of a grassy hill on the horizon;
silhouetted by the setting sun behind your teeth.

Come closer to me,
so close that I am standing on a ledge above the clouds,
so close that I could say that  I am falling into you from the high atmosphere
with nothing to slow my descent but the butterflies in my stomach.
As I fall I fail to memorize your blemishes and pores
and the wetness of your lips
because I am still trying, and failing to memorize your eyes.
My hands grab and claw at the buffeting winds
to cut through air and earth to let you engulf me.


Scheme XABXXX AXXCXXX AXXXXBCXA
Poetic Form
Metre 110100100 1110111 11011011110 00111110 111100101110 001111 11111010111 1111110111101 111011101111 1011010111 111110110100111 1011010110010 010101010111 11011 11111101010101 1111111111001110110 1101110110100110 11111110110001 0010111 011111001011011 11101100101 111101111011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,031
Words 207
Sentences 8
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 7, 9
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 274
Words per stanza (avg) 69
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Submitted on December 19, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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