Analysis of I can't forget you (Haiku)



Staring into space
lost in the moment of time
tears run down my face.

I feel so alone
without you here at my side
why did you leave me.

Your perfume lingers
a beautiful aroma
a sweet reminder.

I can't forget you
you'll always be in my heart
although we're apart

I love you so much
life will be hard without you
I'll always miss you.


Scheme AXA XXX XXX BCC XBB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Metre 10011 1001011 11111 11101 0111111 11111 10110 0100010 01010 11011 111011 1101 11111 1111011 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 318
Words 66
Sentences 4
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 52
Words per stanza (avg) 13
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Submitted on March 26, 2013

Modified on April 10, 2023

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Maria Shaw

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