Analysis of In my subconscious have unquenched desire
In my subconscious have unquenched desire!
By Amir Ali Samji
In my sub-conscious; have unquenched desire
Often; that comes out unprovoked to surprise
I sent many SMS messages to God to enquire
But there is no answer: I am burning in my fire
Not aware why I was punished in childhood attire
That chasing me in all spheres of life to back fire
Don't want that happens to me before get inspired
I know there is a way; but I am confused in my tries
I wanted to grow up as an intelligent man; me to hire
Lost my energy unorthodox way; at me you don't smile
We say; destiny is in our hands; why it makes me cry
Many a times; was very close to my destiny; was fired
Gradually it takes you there; have to visualize to inspire
Life is a process; try to accentuate prior goes sky high
Have to leave behind legacy; so others may inspire
I see a light in a window of hope; though it's skyhigh
I'm still in imagination of visualizing; following my stars
Materially I'm OK; spiritually I want God me to inspire
Unless I get inspire; will be in search to fulfill my desire
Know my struggle won't go vain; in God's merciful empire!
Scheme | AX ABAA AACB AXDC EDED XEAA |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 0101011010 101101 0111011010 1011101101 11101100111010 11111011100110 1011111001010 1101011111110 1111011011010 11110111101011 11011111010011110 11100010111111 111001010111111 1001110111100110 100011111110101 110111010010111 11101100110101 1101001011111 1100010110010011 01000111100001111101 01110111011011010 111011101100100 |
Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 1,094 |
Words | 213 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 22 |
Letters per line (avg) | 40 |
Words per line (avg) | 10 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 146 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 36 |
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Submitted on August 10, 2013
Modified on March 05, 2023
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