Analysis of My Grandfather Wore Stripes



When the drums beckoned from Accomgpong Town,
my grandfather run, and run, and run;
my grandfather ran at high speed
over saw-toothed terrain
with vicious rocks hacking at naked soles,
and blood-hounds mauling at his heels.

My grandfather wore stripes
like the red, white and blue;
and when the hot sun rides the raw waves on his back,
my grandfather stand tall to wipe the sweat from his brow,
then my grandfather wear whips
that echoed louder than the drums
that called beyond Mount Diablo,
but no one was running to his rescue.


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Poetic Form
Metre 10110111 11010101 1101111 101101 1101101101 0111111 11011 101101 010111011111 110111101111 111011 11010101 1101110 1111101110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 517
Words 93
Sentences 2
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 6, 8
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 212
Words per stanza (avg) 47
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Earle Francis Brown

I was born in Montego Bay, Jamaica. I was told that I can write, so I wrote and continues to write. I am currently living in Cincinnati, Ohio, USA. I enjoy reading "real" poetry. My favorite books are the Pslams, Proverbs and Songs of Solomon.Poetry is not just vocabulary, and use of metaphors and formats. Don't be tricked. Poetry should speak life. I love a poem that tells a story. The most memorable poems are the ones that tell someone's story. I don't care about ratings; the truth is always hated. People are people where-ever we go. more…

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