Analysis of My Pain



I hurt when I see your face.                                                                                                                                                When I think of you I cry.                                                                                                                                                                          Hearing your name makes me tremble.                                                                                                                                                  I lied when I said, go away.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Is it wrong for me to love you?                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Is it wrong that I adore you?
I hurt when I care.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       When I call its sometimes a bore.                                           Hearing your voice makes me happy.                                     I tell you important things when you listen.
Can you remember our moments?                                               Can you still be mine forever?
I hurt because you have finally left me.                                       When I get carried away Im afraid.                                           Hearing you call my name makes me faint.                                        I said this once and I'll say it again,
 Now you know,"My Pain".


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111111111111110111110111111011111111111111011 11111111101011011111011101011110 11010101011111010 1101111001111110011011011111111111011101 1111
Characters 2,009
Words 116
Sentences 16
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 84
Words per line (avg) 314
Letters per stanza (avg) 422
Words per stanza (avg) 1,569
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Submitted on June 17, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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