Analysis of On becoming Mother



Happiest moment sweet heart sounds
Ideal sonorous notes urging your womb
Your big hips cheers stout breast
Touch of a new born the real test

You become the person of inspiration
Blessed we feel  with latest creation
Realizing the how vast world thrive
God dwells in heart to bless us survive

Book of life not hiding behind anything
Reality of your soul is the greatest key
Alive to express your vital generation
Precise compact moment for evolution

Loving sonata smear the taste of joy
Cherish your touch, lips,hug and joy,

~~~~~Jawahar Gupta ~~~~~~


Scheme XXAA BBCC XXBB DD X
Poetic Form
Metre 10010111 0110011011 111111 11011011 1010101010 111110010 10001111 110111101 1111100110 1011110101 01101110010 0110101010 1001010111 1011101 110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 535
Words 94
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2, 1
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted on January 23, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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