Analysis of Peril



In your eyes I''m the least important,
I''m bearing sleepless torture,
From weeks of cold through the weeks of scorture,
My hand held out, can you spare a dime?
Get a job expells from the mouth,
While greed on the mind,
You ponder the poor is lazy,
This you percieve all the time?
Wealth can make you crazy,
The lustre makes you blind,
A drug addict you may think automatic,
Still don''t offer to help,
It''s like a minnow being lost in the kelp,
You don''t know the pain someone''s heart felt,
Two ways your judgement caused death,
Blessings could''ve descended on you, but you gave none,
And a possible friend to you,
You didn''t make one, starvation and neglect
Are the perils that take someone.


Scheme ABBCDEFCFEGHHIJKLMK
Poetic Form
Metre 011101010 1101010 111110111 111111101 1011101 11101 11001110 111101 111110 010111 0101111010 111011 11010101001 11101111 1111011 101010111111 00100111 1111010001 1010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 680
Words 126
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 536
Words per stanza (avg) 126
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Submitted on April 23, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Al-qahira Bakra

I'm an historical poet from under the old management of poetry.com.I've been submitting since 1999.It all started when Montell williams had a contest for poetry to raise money for M.S.My first poem submitted was published.The aroused Third Eye in the book called enternal portraits.This book was sold around the world.This is the first time fans have seen what Mark Robinson looks like.That was my name til I changed to Al-Qahira Bakra.You can find me on Facebook under this name.I also had two other publication in books sold around the world and one placed on C.D,that was ressurection.Climax was published before that and I was in california.They wanted me to come back to the east coast to recite climax in washington D.C to 1,000,000 people.I'm back now and apologize to my fans.I was also recognized as one of the greatest poets of the 21st century and I possibly still am.Well let me show you that I can be number one.You will see my work cultivate from poetry to lyrics and then you will see what level I'm on. more…

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