Analysis of precious amiss



its a deep, throbbing motion kills
one moment forgetful, then it comes back
mood changes, at loves own will
a journey we all must take, some lack

bursts of red, palms sting
numns down to ice, only stone
fire burns up, your wings
white matter evovles at the bone

you fly high to the sky, embedded with love
swopping down to dungens of hell, gate welcomes you
clipped wings, weak, but fragile as a dove

eyes flare
thoughts trickle back
demands emergae and beware
before the heart is attacked


Scheme XAXA XBXB CXC DADX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 10110101 1100101111 1101111 010111111 11111 1111101 101111 1101101 11110101011 1111111101 111110101 11 1101 011001 0101101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 475
Words 89
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3, 4
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 98
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on January 01, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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