Analysis of Race



We are in the race
body moves daily
with bundlesof desire
pass through narrow lanes
struggle to grab
the world of comfort
 without leaving space for soul
in this journey we think
 our mind can explore
 all the hidden joy for us
in return we meet
world of pains on our way
a deep well of passion
bliss us with sufferings
prove our transient breath meaningless
let us depute heart
for hidden joy
not the mind
to lead our journey
 to have the blissfull joy.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLMNJOPQBP
Poetic Form Tetractys  (25%)
Metre 11001 10110 11010 11101 1011 01110 0110111 011011 101101 1010111 00111 1111101 011110 111100 110101100 1111 1101 101 111010 11011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 435
Words 85
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 365
Words per stanza (avg) 85
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Submitted on October 16, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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