Analysis of Random Thoughts



Random thoughts.
On a crinkled paper.
Of thoughts.
Twisting, burning, in my mind.
Of, us, you, and him.
Them!
So many unanswered rhymes?
Pretty.
ugly!
revengeful!
REAL!
Truth!
Is that at times.
Wondering what happened to the youthfulness?
She once was.
Young!
Ding, ding , the memories.
Rusted!
As she held on.
It began to
slice her deep with in.
The blood dripped.
At last, she began to feel.
Something?
Anything!
Pain!
Resentment.
It was real!

Copyright by
Lorianne Dixon
3-26-16


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Poetic Form
Metre 101 10110 11 1010011 11101 1 110101 10 10 1 1 1 1111 100110101 111 1 110100 10 1111 1011 10110 011 1110111 10 10 1 010 111 101 110 1
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 451
Words 80
Sentences 28
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 28, 3
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 12
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 182
Words per stanza (avg) 41
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Submitted on February 21, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Lori Dixon

My name is Lori DixonWriting poems, short stories has always been a passion of mine. Writing is my way to deal, understand my own thoughts, feelings.Most of my writing is deep and emotional.Writing my poems is a freedom for me.As I begin to write each word describing my feelings, thoughts, it allows me, a better understanding of myself, I love writing, it's exciting . more…

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