Analysis of Reading Maps



There was time
when our joined bodies
looked like a map
of New York City.

Arms and legs
intertwining, forming
right angles that jutted,
forged avenues,
paved new roads to travel.

We seem to have lost
our sense of direction
at least a common
direction.
I am eastbound
and you are looking west
and our prostrate
bodies now reflect
parallel highways
that never intersect
and paths that never cross.


Scheme XXXA XXAXX XBBBXXXCXCX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (45%)
Etheree  (30%)
Metre 111 110110 1101 11110 101 10010 11011 110 111110 11111 1011010 11010 010 111 011101 01010 10101 101 11001 011101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 376
Words 69
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 11
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 107
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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