Analysis of Safety in Numbers



The sun is setting and the lake is still.
There are no other people around.
The bugs are becoming fierce,
coyotes howl, and loons unleash their murderous screams.
Bats swoop in off the lake;
I am at the mercy of the wild.

I find an odd comfort in the fact that this same scene
has unfolded for thousands of people before me.
For thousands of years before now.

Perhaps they were not seated
upon a 100% polyester folding chair.
Perhaps they were not scribbling
with a fine point pen upon a crumpled old receipt;
But they were here.

I can feel their spirits like wind howling through the trees,
their histories echoing like the crackle of the fire.
Their presence whispers that I am safe here.


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 674
Words 126
Sentences 10
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 3, 5, 3
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 137
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mwalimu

My name is Theresa, I love to write and read poetry. My favourite poet is Billy Collins. I am mainly inspired to write by everyday happenings or feelings, and I often write with some humour or sarcasm. My travel experiences have also influenced my writing, some of my favourite places to travel have been Cuba, Tanzania, Uganda, and South Africa. I was born in Canada but I am now living and teaching in the Middle East. Please feel free to leave comments or suggestions on any of my poems. more…

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