Analysis of She



Getting to know her, was such a treat.
Endlessly I love her, there is no peak.
Never will she know, just how far I'd go.
I never knew, did she love me, yes or no?
Today she is not here, has it been a year?
And on my heart, is a stain of pain and fear.

And one day I hope she returns to my life.
Not as we were, mired in strife.
Nothing less than to be my wife.

Bitter; this end won't mend us.
Only loving and caring, until we are dust.
Yearning for your tender touch.
Do you know, if you believe, so much;

Much love you could know.
Candles surround us in the snow.
Before we kiss and embrace our fate.
Ringing wedding bells and rings, would be so great.
Intertwining our lives into a unity.
Delveing into endless possibilities.
Ending up in love forever, if you promise.


Scheme XXAABB CCC DXEE AAFFXXD
Poetic Form Tetractys  (25%)
Metre 101101101 1001101111 1011111111 11011111111 01111111101 01111011101 01111101111 1110101 10111111 1011111 101001001111 1011101 111110111 11111 10011001 0111001101 10101011111 100101010100 101100100 101010101110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 751
Words 152
Sentences 19
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 3, 4, 7
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 146
Words per stanza (avg) 38
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Submitted on February 04, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Gabriel McBride

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