Analysis of Silent Echoes



Signs are groping silently
And, slowly shimmering in noonday sun,
The nearby trees stand waving.
But the signs stand still,
Their parched brown heads like any old Egyptian's,
Faces full of worldly hieroglyphs
They cannot comprehend,
Still chattering mutely to unheeding gods.

The street lamps, caught with heads averted
As if at the moment of casting,
Each like all the others of its caste,
stare down, monotonous, along their solemn avenues,
Those dusty halls whose feeble flares
Forever light retreating tunnels to the past,
Now hushed, no power left within them.
The silence lengthens…

Arrested long ago, these sightless symbols,
Silent gropers of another day, can ever stir
No more than people of Pompeii. But like them,
Mingle, less with great, with shaven skulls atop stiff spines,
The silent drone of empty phrases to a silent sky.
Forever locked in place as blank-faced sentinels,
They seem the lifeless armsticks of some long-forgotten
Semaphore, still pointing nowhere in particular.

And nothing steps and nothing shrills
But a fitful wind,
Whistling as in a flapping shroud
Around these sparsely scattered shells
Of dead grey ikons strung like gibbets
Up the sullen hill,
And finally only echoes of a single image
Dying out into an empty sky.


Scheme XABCDDXD XBEDDEFD DGFDHDAG DXXDDCXH
Poetic Form
Metre 1110100 010100011 0111110 10111 111111011 10111001 11001 11001111 011111010 111010110 111010111 1101000111010 11011101 010101010101 111101011 01010 0101011110 101101011101 1111011111 1011111010111 01011101010101 010101111100 110101111010 1110100100 01010101 10101 10100101 01110101 1111111 10101 01001010101010 101011101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,224
Words 204
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 254
Words per stanza (avg) 51
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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