Analysis of The Girl I Love And Lost



I met her at the fair when i saw her my heart was already there.
looked at her smile and I new she had to be mine.
I was hesataint at first, nervous shaking.
Even though It was Our first date.
I new she had to be mine.
After one date I had to have her.
friends said I was nuts that I fully didnt know her.
I didnt care, I just knew in my heart.
that she was the one, I got what I wished.
she was mine, but months went passed.
and she drifted away, Now one year has passed.
I miss her with my heart.
O my bernadette I love you.
with all my heart.
Only if you could see, what I see.
you would understand where your heart would be.
I miss my bernadette, My heart is not the same.
I think about her everyday, I love you.
wish you could see, then we could be together.
for all eternity, my only love bernadette.


Scheme ABCDBEEFGHHFIFJJKIEL
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11010111101110101 110101111111 111111010 101111011 1111111 101111110 111111110110 111111011 1110111111 1111111 01100111111 110111 11001111 1111 101111111 110111111 111001111101 11010101111 11111111010 1101001101001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 787
Words 168
Sentences 20
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 609
Words per stanza (avg) 168
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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