Analysis of The Hero system



Do you see the weeds off in the wind
wild with excitement of the dancing hymn
organic green carpet growing under my feet
in this blue watery world a journey it has become our seat
to have been born in the age of innocence would be such a treat
as a child spirit now born
to a system of hero's now thrown
a baby taking in senses of an animal world
the beast in toddlers have us trying to control
instincts as far as old,baptized with the demons soul
of a creature of choice endless doubt so cold
reflected in sibling rivalry the need to be bold
to be a hero of worth in the universe whole
even against my blood for evil has his word
earth is in need of superman indeed
for as close as we try to fly n rule the sky
we will fall for that one-way flight we had to buy
the need to want for in eden we'd be
soon comes the stage of leave
to return in knees of peace
good day for I have nothing left to say


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Poetic Form
Metre 111011001 1101010101 010110101011 01110010101101101 1111001110011101 1011011 101011011 01010010111001 010101110101 10111110101 10101110111 01001010001111 110101100101 100111110111 1101110001 111111111101 111111111111 0111101011 110111 1010111 1111110111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 878
Words 187
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 709
Words per stanza (avg) 186
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Submitted on August 18, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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