Analysis of And The Rains Descended And The Floods Came

Edith Nesbit 1858 (Kennington, Surrey ) – 1924 (New Romney, Kent)



NOW the far waves roll nearer and more near,
The wind's awake, the pitiless wind's awake,
It shrieks the menace that I dare not hear,
Soon at my feet the angry waves will break
In desolating wrath--and here I stand
Helpless my house is built upon the sand.

O you, whose house upon a rock is set,
Laugh, safe and sure, at threatening wave and wind.
You chose the better part and yet--and yet,
There was no other ground that I could find,
And I was weary and I longed to raise
A house to guard my shivering nights and days.

And it was pleasant in the house I made,
While still the floods and winds were held asleep.
I blessed it at the dawn, at night I prayed
As though its dear foundations had been deep
Sunk in the rock. I whispered in surmise,
'What if winds never wake, floods never rise?'

And now the waves are near and very near,
And here I wait and wonder which may be
The wave in which my house will disappear,
My little house that loved and sheltered me,
Where joy still sings, her garland in her hand,
Built on the sand, oh God, built on the sand!


Scheme ABXBCC DEDEFF GHGHII AJAJCC
Poetic Form
Metre 1011110011 01010100101 1101011111 1111010111 0110111 1011110101 1111010111 11011100101 1101010101 1111011111 0111001111 01111100101 0111000111 1101010101 1111011111 1111010111 1001110001 1111011101 0101110101 0111010111 010111101 1101110101 1111010001 1101111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,040
Words 209
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 204
Words per stanza (avg) 52
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Edith Nesbit

Edith Nesbit (married name Edith Bland) was an English author and poet; she published her books for children under the name of E. Nesbit. She wrote or collaborated on more than 60 books of children's literature. She was also a political activist and co-founded the Fabian Society, a socialist organisation later affiliated to the Labour Party. more…

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