Analysis of We, for sure



“Do not tell my owner that I did “
Give me 100 bucks and I provide you feed
That may give you over all lead
In business secrets to read

Such contacts are available
To sort out and take you out from troubles
Not in one sector or particular field
But prevalent in every corner and held

You bribe first and then work is done
You pay nothing and work stands undone
This has become part of life story
Everyone goes for it and feels no sorry

It involves fewer amounts in transaction
But has far rooted affect in each section
You get no good treatment if unaware
But prompt service if approach and dare

Hardly few might have opted for honesty
Otherwise everybody is eager to receive and ready
Their face lines may reveal greed
God only knows how much is their need?

Right from top to bottom
They have full access with freedom
Few of them are caught and punished
But it is not rooted out completely or finished

“It is world phenomenon” politicians claim
How can we take responsibility and blame?
It is spread globally and we are helpless
Such is the tendency to escape in such cases

Bribery is taking heavy toll
Public is suffering at every call
Who do we blame for such failure?
I think it is “we” only for sure


Scheme XABB XXXX CCDD CCEE DDAA FFGG HHXX XXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 111110111 111010111 11111011 0101011 1110100 1110111110 10110101001 110001001001 11101111 111001101 110111110 1011101110 10110010010 11110010110 111110101 111010101 10111101100 10100110101010 1111011 110111111 111110 1111110 11111010 1111101010110 1110100101 11110010001 11110001110 1101001010110 100110101 10110011001 11111110 111111011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,185
Words 227
Sentences 4
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 121
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted on March 26, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Hasmukh Mehta

am an ex-serviceman from Indian Air force. I joined Oriental Insurance Company and retired from there too in May, 2007. I have been graduated from Punjab University. I hold technical qualification like Diploma in Radio/engineering .I have done English and Hindi stenography as well. I had mastered the art in Morse telephony too. I am associated with several welfare organizations and served long time as Union leader too. I am at present working as hobby writer. I write poems on various subjects and invite suggestions from all the quarters. I have written one memoir named “As I see it” and ready for publication. One interesting part of writing I would love to share with all my reader friends. I am not sure weather it may be the same case with all as I do not want to be caught in any controversy. When I sit on my personal computer, there is absolutely no thought in mind as to what is to be picked up as thought and written. These all things I leave it to the discretion of almighty to fill my mind with relevant ideas. So far I have been graced by Him and as result able to compose about 4000 poems. I have be awarded with 4 achievement award from the www.ezinearticles.com for successfully meeting with their standard. I am writing on many sites so as to be associated with reader friends all over the world. I am thankful to all those who have supported me in my initial days. more…

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