Analysis of When I see her first
Haridas Shyamkumar 1968 (Kallambalam, Kerala)
When I see her first,
Cute and smile towards me.
Innocent eyes staring me,
Talking lips hungry kiss.
Walking along with her aunt,
Smiling only when she meet.
Texting always loving heart,
Hungry for a sweeten kiss.
Day and night dreaming me,
Smiling always when she meets-
Whenever meet me talking sweet,
Till her heart is betray me.
When she gets time tell me sweet,
Can we go out for a dinner?
Japan, Korean, Indian foods-
She never like then pass to me.
When she join to my life,
Happy, jealous and dreaming nights,
Broken promise from her mouth,
Show me her lips only smile.
I think she will in my life,
Go with someone say a bye.
Broken heart mine forever,
Pain is too much think to die.
Haridas Shyamkumar
Copyright © 2012 Haridas Shyamkumar
Scheme | XAAB XCXB AXCA CDXA EXXX EFDF DD |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11101 101011 1001101 101101 1001101 1010111 11101 1010101 101101 101111 01011101 1011011 1111111 11111010 010101001 11011111 111111 10100101 1010101 1101101 1111011 111101 1011010 1111111 11 1011 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 722 |
Words | 136 |
Sentences | 11 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2 |
Lines Amount | 26 |
Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 83 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 19 |
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Submitted on October 11, 2012
Modified on March 05, 2023
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