Analysis of When you see your stature; you ashamed of being here



Think who we are; and what's the purpose being here
Your thoughts will take you to your destiny with no fear
When you see your stature; you ashamed of being here
Once there; want to see beyond galaxy of stars; sphere

Beauty of thoughts; empowers with knowledge of stars
More go into it; get closer to wonders of Divine Park
When reach peak of knowledge; excel in; and feel smart
You don't want to miss any shot of kingdom of thoughts

Now see something emerging in and out of your wisdom
You are in scenario of scientific presentation of reasons
Reasoning; is setting logical data; is the beauty of vision
Its the cause of divinity; you see it in mental presentation

U know why I emphasize so much on thinking of envision
This universe revolves on axis of pious people's vision
They balance forces of good; and e*** with spiritual vision
Without which revolving planets, may slip out of friction

Divine forces want us to live with ethics of humanism
But we devise own innovative ideas to go out of prism
Our wrong doings are cause of imbalances in the system
It brings havoc; and disasters; but we do it with freedom


Scheme ABAB XXXX CXDD DDDD CCCC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (60%)
Metre 111101010101 1111111100111 1111101011101 1111101100111 101101011011 110111101101011 111110010011 1111110111011 11100100011110 11001001010010110 100110100101010110 10110100111010010 111110111101010 110011101101010 1101011011100010 01101010111110 011011111101100 11011100010111110 1011011101000010 111000101111110
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,096
Words 202
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 45
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 179
Words per stanza (avg) 40
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Submitted on September 24, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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