Analysis of ~ My Living Doll ~



To my wife, my living doll
Nothing, means nothing,
without you at all
The rain doesn't fall
The clouds don't form
The sky is never blue
I'm lost without your glow,
when it comes to you
My love, you'll always know
I shower you with flowers,
 and all your desires
Love, real love,
 only comes around once
I knew that, from the very first glance
I'm so grateful I had that chance
When your out of my reach,
my heart is sad, and worried
The sunshine of my life, is now unhurried
I still see the stars in your green eyes
The refelction of light is still a surprise
I know my life is right by yourside
I hold you with all my might
I will show you my love tonight
The stars still shine and never tire
The moon will have a smile
The skies will roar with fire


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111101 10110 01111 01101 0111 011101 110111 11111 11111 1101110 011010 111 101011 111101011 11101111 111111 1111010 0111111010 111010111 011111001 11111111 1111111 11111101 011101010 011101 0111110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 725
Words 150
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 582
Words per stanza (avg) 150
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Submitted on February 05, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Yvonne Sensing

I've been writing since I was a kid...I enjoy putting thoughts onto paper it's like clearing out my mind. I'm not saying I'm good, but I try. Still I write, but the thoughts in my head get jumbled and it all comes out wrong. I know what I want to say, I hope it comes out that way. Anyway, I still write maybe to leave a little piece of me behind. Not here to cause trouble or be a hero. I am a kind person with a big heart and I only do what makes me feel good. Poetry happens to make me very happy and joyful. Sharing my most inner thoughts makes me a target it seems, with folks that don't like me. I assure I am not a hater, but I will stand up for myself for what's right and true. This site has made me feel like were all family and here for each other not a place to bicker and fight among us, but to enjoy each others work with respect and love. Please understand I am not here to cause problems, I am here for the same reasons you are. more…

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