Analysis of The insane dream of life and death
Phil Roberts 1957 (Melbourne)
A lonely man is struggling
Through the storms of life,
He wonders why he's never found
A lady to make his wife.
He's lonely for the family
That the poor man never had,
Wondering when he made the wrong turn
Just when his life went bad.
No son to carry on his name
No daughter for him to give away,
The insane dream of life and death
Has made his life a bane.
He wonders why he doesn't die
Like all his family and friends,
He almost wishes for the day
When finally the dream will end.
An insane dream of happiness
That never came to him,
As though the Lord made this man
On some off-hand whim.
The insane dream of life and death
Will surely never cease,
Even when the man’s life runs out
And at last, he is at peace.
So on he goes relentlessly
Although he often wonders why,
On he goes on his hopeless way
Wishing just to die.
The insane dream of life and death
Has made his life a pain,
He wonders what new miseries
His life will soon contain.
Nothing in his world seems sane
Yes, madness seems so rife,
And in the end, he wonders if
It would be best to end his life.
But the insane dream of life and death
Keeps the poor man struggling on,
Wondering just when he strayed
When his poor life first went wrong.
THE END
© Copyright 2021, Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
Scheme | xaxa bcxc xdEf gxdh xixi Ejxj bgdg Efxf faxa exxx hxx |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 01011100 10111 11011101 0101111 11010100 1011101 100111011 111111 11110111 110111101 00111101 111101 11011101 11110001 1110101 11000111 10111100 110111 1101111 11111 00111101 110101 10101111 0111111 11110100 1110101 11111101 10111 00111101 111101 11011100 111101 1001111 110111 00011101 11111111 100111101 10111001 1001111 1111111 01 101010 100100010 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,243 |
Words | 249 |
Sentences | 11 |
Stanzas | 11 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3 |
Lines Amount | 43 |
Letters per line (avg) | 23 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 91 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 23 |
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