Analysis of The Rain of Life

Wake to the ache of a cheap clock radio
   start a pot
      feed and pet the cat
         sip a cup
then peel open the eyes in the rain of life.
don some cloth
drag to the pit of fate
do the time
collect the change
stop and suck a brew for the road
swallow some grease
shuffle to the bed
another day is gone.

Wake to the ache of a cheap clock radio
   start a pot
      feed the cat
chug a cup
then peel open the eyes in the rain of life.
don some cloth
race to the pit of fate
do some time
collect the change
stop and sling a few brews for the road
swallow some grease
catch some cable
stumble to the bed
another day is gone.

Wake late to the ache of a cheap clock radio
   skip the pot
      trip over the cat
and rip open the eyes in the rain of life.
change the mind
call the man and tell a lie
sit and dream and wonder why
power up and write a line
decide it’s worthless
catch some cable
catch some cable
catch some cable
another day is gone.
Wake on the couch to the ache
of a distant cheap clock radio
   start a pot
      feed and rub the cat
say a prayer thanking God that it’s Saturday
then peel open the eyes in the rain of life.