Up high in a tree

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  This poem has a lovely and peaceful vibe that really immerses the reader in the experience of sitting high in a tree. The imagery of the wind blowing in the hair and the view of the clouds and plane passing by creates a sense of solitude and appreciation for nature. The simplicity of the poem also adds to its charm.
  
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  To enhance the poem further, you could consider adding more sensory details to really transport the reader into the scene. Descriptions of the sounds, smells, and feelings of being up high in a tree could make the experience even more vivid. Additionally, you could experiment with varying the rhythm and rhyme scheme to add some musicality to the poem. Overall, great job with capturing the peaceful beauty of being up high in a tree! more »

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