Please take my number !
I love your smile and your eyes
And your beautiful hair
and the scent of your presence
Will you let me continue, or must I stop there?
The smartest and most wonderful, I think that you are
No one could outdo you
Anywhere here, or in places afar.
I could go on and on
Of all I love about you
I really believe your the most beautiful
I try to deny it, but really, I do.
Today, you’re in luck
My card to you I can give
Just let me find it
My number is on it, and so is the address where I live.
There’s something I must say
So please don’t get me wrong
It’s my personality that sometimes
makes me seem to come on too strong
Not an affair, not a romance,
or to make your marriage end,
but what I really want, is just to be your closest friend
So, a simple card I give you
and to end this silly rhyme,
I tell you this friend will answer your call
Anywhere, anytime.
About this poem
Written about a friend who changed my life and brought me out of darkness, but heistant to get close.
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Written on February 05, 2021
Submitted on November 10, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | XAXA BCB XCXC XDXD XEXE XFF CGXG |
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 882 |
Words | 192 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 3, 4, 4, 4, 3, 4 |
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