Presents



Presents

If you were here,
Just a percentage of you,
It would be like Christmas morning,
Sparkling, bright and just briefly aglow

How quickly the packages
Would be ripped open, still in the night
With dawn we’d be left wondering
Is there more?

We’d toy with what’s exposed
Turn it inside out, shake it upside down
And swallow the disappointment
Later, during grace.

Again, I’d regret you being here
Because I asked for the wrong thing
But there would be next year
Time to mourn what was missed

Time to fancy a present
That was never a gift.

LE
3-16-2022

About this poem

What we wish for in displaced excitement reveals its self to be the totality of what you previously knew:

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Written on March 17, 2022

Submitted on March 17, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AXBX XXBX XXCX ABXX CX XX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 568
Words 112
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 2, 2

Lori Eilers

Graduate degree in English Literature from Drew University, Have lived in Texas now for over 25 yrs which always inspires me to write. Whether I do it or not is quite another thing. more…

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