Allow me to be free

Azka Fbr. Labika 1998 (Jakarta)



i play your favorite song
at one
in the middle of the night
i close my eyes and blend in it
i dance
with full of desire in my blood
the song only lasts for two minutes
i am not satisfied
so i keep it replayed
on
and on. and on
suddenly rain drops under my body without i realize
¡ am. all. lost
in my own wild fantasy about you
"i haven't felt this alive" i whishper, while my body
keeps moving
slowly my hand pulls up
the black silk dress that i wear until it touches
my inner thigh and start
i play with the most sensitive parts
of my body
i am helpless, i scream
i collapse
where are you?

the only way it is to make love
to you without touching you, what more could i do?
you already put
me in prison so just tonight love,
allow me to be free.

About this poem

About a woman who is suffering from not being able to touch her man. Because of the long distance that separates them both. She is in desire and is high in the middle of the night. Yet she just could do nothing other than playing with herself while imagining him.

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Submitted by Azkafbrlabika on August 29, 2022

Modified on April 27, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXXXXXXXAAXXBCXXXXXCXXB DBXDC
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 748
Words 160
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 24, 5

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