Pitiful Soul



Pitiful Soul

A longing mind looking sorrowful
Like a widow looking pitiful
Like a bird being caged
A shell of wisdom compromised
 
He says in his being what a shame;
I still down with my aim
looking fierce but be being abysmal
"Who would now carry my blame" he says

What a pity for a man insane;
A man that could not swim through his adventures
that could not stand on his composure
but rather take a tough break

I'm lame, cripple, blind of being alive,
"What a pitiful soul" he thought.

About this poem

The poem is about life, pity, sorrow, and sound melancholic. Sometime in life when a man is down or couldn't rise beyond his imagination he would likely give up and put everything on nature. Like line one of the PO says " A longing mind looking sorrowful" for me, a pity and a longing mind(man) always looking sorrowful even like a widow always looking pitiful and lonely. Read this poem and understand the stand of a pity, wretched and compromise man. Thanks

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Written on August 15, 2022

Submitted by osobusunday631 on August 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAXX BBAX XXXX XX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 499
Words 107
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2

Sunday Emmanuel Osobu

I am Osobu Sunday Emmanuel, I hailed from Ikire, Irewole Local Government Osun State Nigeria. I am 19 years old. A 100 level student of Department of Linguistics and Nigerian Languages at Ekiti State University, Ado Ekiti, Ekiti State. I have passion for writing poems and scripts but always timid of writing maybe because I didn't not have enough encourage or because I have non educated parents. I always aim to be a better person that will be useful for a Nigeria because I am a patriotic Nigerian. more…

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