The deep dark Hole
there is a hole inside my soul that never seems to close
Ive filled it with all kinds of things as far as I can recall
this gaping hole just seems to grow
the light just seems to dim
and very soon I find myself in an ocean I must swim
sarrounded by the darkness there is no light in sight
I trust what they are telling me in hopes of the other side
frozen by the darkness ,I try to move along the path
barely making headway
almost ready to give up
dreaming of the bottle in full throttle
I still don't give in; don't give up
I feel the pain and the lack thereof
my existence in the darkness
nothingness feels like death to my soul
I wanna smash a window just so I could feel
just so I can see the blood
of crimson read instead
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Written on November 22, 2022
Submitted by eva_z on November 22, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 749 |
Words | 170 |
Stanzas | 17 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
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