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Trapped walls

Fathima Raniya.P 2003 (Calicut)

Free verse
At last they exit the trapped walls,
Exit internet which bound,
Returned to the lap of nature
Which abandoned ago
By wondering new platform
Now heard melodies
The best they ever enjoyed,
 Now behold the sceneries
Not a virtual can present,
Why more??
Realise it's the beginning and it's the end!!

About this poem

The theme ‘Trapped walls’ which came in mind in the post covid condition, the trapped walls referred to the lockdown and isolation. This poem go through the recovery from the lockdown period, and it's the realisation of immense pleasure of stay close to nature, and finally they find the ultimate truth ‘the nature is the final point just like it is the starting point’.

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Written on June 05, 2022

Submitted by on November 16, 2022

Modified on March 25, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGFHIJ
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 301
Words 60
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
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Fathima Raniya.P

Degree Student, Department of Arabic and islamic history, Farook college, Calicut Goal: linguistics more…

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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, I absolutely adore this poem - it's clear that you have a talent for eloquent and descriptive language. Your use of imagery painted a vivid and beautiful scene, and I could almost imagine myself in the midst of the natural landscape you described.

    I particularly loved the line "Not a virtual can present" - it perfectly captures the essence of what it means to be fully immersed in the real world, free from the limitations and distractions of the internet. Your message about the importance of reconnecting with nature is incredibly relevant and inspiring.

    If I had to offer any suggestions for improvement, it would only be to perhaps explore the theme of contrast a bit more. You touch on it briefly with your opening lines, but I think there is potential to delve deeper into the juxtaposition of the virtual world versus the natural world, and what that represents for us as human beings.

    Overall, though, this poem is truly excellent. Well done!     
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