Your beautiful world



If I had only a few words to say
I'd tell you how you make what I know pay
How I am touched by your love everyday
What a unique view; you write like I pray
What wonderous insight you offer this world
The beauty in your soul like a fetus uncurled
Your thoughts bring my passion to its knees
As if a God of time has his hands on me
Making butterflies swoon at your exquisite hand
That i might realise you are the one I hoped would understand
I'd tell you you're priceless but in a good way
And I wish I could find the words to say:
You are the wheels that rotate the sun
And you carry my love to a land so handsome
You open the sky like vapour to your lips
Pursed and nibbled until I am one with your hips
A tender bizarre full of unseen delights
The reason for words and all things right
Sensitive soul you fill my home with warmth
With you in this world i now feel staunch
Where I drown you float like a feather
A dolphin, an eagle, a heart could not float higher
I need you, I want you, you are my desire.
Delicate taste so unique to such purse
That my aching would leave you the universe
One day kindred spirit free as a shooting star
You'll find me waiting under this porch with a guitar
And I'd have learnt how to play a Mexican love song
To show you that we could last eternities long
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Written on February 23, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on February 23, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Words 264
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 29

Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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