Jesuits Venturing



The storm had challenged
The ship’s planking, canvas, cross arms.
Helps or rope restraints
Had been employed
Almost too late.
Francis had nearly
Lost his chest of letters, Loyola’s work.
Sepia pictures of sister Annette
Their mastiff Prince
And five special friends
Training, exchanging
At the Abbey.
They often gave their
Best in the Silence.
Or passing the bread
And cheeses.


This China Bay was the
Strangest colour of pale blue.
The working ship
Coolies all consigned
To deathly black.
His robe was a purple.
Scarf was white with
Blood red edges.
Cap three-cornered.
Friend Aloysius was constantly
Into his dictionary for Mandarin.


Seemed as if ship’s parrots (3)
Had richer, more usable vocabulary.
“Eight o’clock Boys
Have you washed, prayed, dressed.
AWWKKK.”


Captain would show ship’s charts.
Both monks tried their best
To catch on, study routes.
Assess depths and trenches.
There was also that navigating
Hand tool. Astrolabe.
Made reference to stars.
Just as Wise Men knew courses
In Luke chapter two.


Would the Christ arrive in these parts
Gentle down the yellow skins.
Fast footed, short stepped souls.
Nix their superstitions
By the sheer force of Love.
Communion, Last Rights?
Rosary rounds.
Patient listening,
Noble burden bearing?
Lord willing.
Always Lord willing.

About this poem

Ignatius Loyola missed the grandeur of Rome, but from parts in Spain, he did wonders of wisdom, fairness and administration.

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Written on March 26, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on March 26, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on March 26, 2023

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Words 244
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 16, 11, 5, 9, 11

Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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  • AIDA
    I absolutely loved reading this beautiful poem! The imagery you've used is so evocative, and I was completely transported to the scene you've described. The way you explore the challenges of sailing in a storm, and the importance of the letters, pictures, and memories we hold dear was really moving.

    As for improvement suggestions, I think you could consider playing with structure and form a bit more. Perhaps experiment with line breaks and stanza lengths to emphasize certain ideas and create more variation in the pace and tone of the poem. Additionally, while the use of Mandarin and the navigation tools were interesting details, I think there could have been more done to bring them fully into the poem's themes and goals.

    Overall, though, this was a delightful read that left me feeling uplifted and inspired. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us!
     
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