War
While you are sick,
You are at war with your mind
A war of attrition
One side is stronger than the other,
With bigger cannons and more reason to fight
The other is weak
The other side has no cause
One side is armed with bullets of titanium
That pierce straight through flesh,
And leave venom in the wound
The other equipped with nothing but copper shields
That bend and creak with each bullet taken
One side is fighting,
The other gave up the moment the war started
They take the bullets and stand in an open field,
Helpless
Not trying to defend themselves or fight back
They've accepted their fate
About this poem
A poem about how depression can feel like a war not worth fighting.
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Written on April 18, 2023
Submitted by august88 on April 18, 2023
Modified on April 21, 2023
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 602 |
Words | 120 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 7, 5, 6 |
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