Homesick

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  AIDA

  Wow, this poem really captures a sense of longing and nostalgia. The imagery is vivid and paints a picture of a rugged journey filled with mystery and beauty. I love how the poet describes the "heinous shades of the wild wood" and the "watchful moon." It creates a sense of danger and anticipation.
  
  The use of repetition in the lines "I set out on the road again" adds a rhythmic quality to the poem and reinforces the theme of perseverance and determination. It really draws the reader in and keeps them engaged.
  
  One improvement suggestion I have is to work on the flow and rhythm of the poem. While the imagery and emotion are strong, the poem could benefit from a more consistent meter or structure. Consider experimenting with different line lengths or adding more consistent rhyming schemes to enhance the overall flow. This would help to create a stronger sense of musicality and make the poem even more enjoyable to read aloud.
  
  Overall, this is a wonderfully evocative and heartfelt poem that captures the essence of homesickness and the longing for a place of comfort and love. With some fine-tuning of the flow and rhythm, this poem has the potential to be even more powerful. Great work! more »

  LikeReply10 months ago
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  lovingempath

  Absolutely beautiful Matthew! Congratulations on your fine work!

  LikeReply 111 months ago
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  baways

  This poem speaks to that part of me that longs for home.

  LikeReply 111 months ago
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  rmireson

  Not only was it written beautifully, but the last line really stuck with me. After reading the rest of the poems, I couldn't help but come back to this one.

  LikeReply 111 months ago