If it be our will



If it be our will
To love our father more
We will do that
Because he also want our love
In return
We know already that our father
Love us without limits
And we also can’t live without
Our fathers love
It was our father that
Made us with his holy hands
Many years ago
And had placed us on
Earth to live
Father we must tell you
That we are already used to
Live on earth
With other strangers that
You made with you holy hands
We also have some good
Friends that you have made
With your holy hands
Many years ago
Today thanks god we are all
Adults
And you father gave us
Some freedom in our lives
Yes father we are glad
That we have freedom
To live our lives
The way we want
Also every single night
We pray for you
Before we go to bed
After we are finishing praying to you
We go straight to sleep
In our cozy warm beds
Also we never mistreat our friends
Because we would lose them
And we need friends in our lives
We can’t live without friends in our lives
Because we would feel very lonely
And also isolated.
We know that it is very difficult to
Make friends in life
Yes we have the right to chose
The people who we want to be our friends
In life
We don’t want rich friends to be our friends
Because they also hate the poor people
We make friends with the poor people only
We also treat them with respect
Also we accept them the way they are
And they also accept us the way we are
Also they have feelings
The same way we do
And we must respect each other’s feelings
We can’t hurt each other’s feelings
We just can’t buy our friends with money
Also we must keep comments to ourselves.
If we make each other’s a promise we must keep it
And not break the promise
Also we must live our lives to the fullest before we
Die
Trust me we only live once our lives
We are going to die one day
And go to heaven
And in heaven we will be able to
Meet again our loved ones

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Written on June 10, 2023

Submitted by aldo_k on June 10, 2023

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Words 379
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