MORE MONEY OUT THAN MONEY IN



MORE MONEY OUT, THAN MONEY IN

How about that money I owe?
Letters come to say Hello!.
Another one came yesterday.
Hello again, how much can you pay?

More money out than money in
for this my tongue yearns for gin.
Oh! So little here to spare.
Who writes Hello and really cares?

Money for more, the more the money,
swallow pride pies sweet as honey.
It takes forty acres and a mule,
a paid day’s work is the golden rule.

Some bills on angels’ wings have weight
ten times their size to Heaven’s gate.
Money, oh money, even up here.
Heaven invoices and adds arrears.

Less money in, less money’s a burden
in a jar a shoebox an amount uncertain.
no dollars to grin, no dollars to pocket
only Benjamins stashed away, rock it!

Money to contract & sign on shifting sand
A thousand grains right through my hands.
the more money, the more money to blow
How about that money I owe?

About this poem

After emailing numerous payments online, I wrote this poem about paying the bills every month but I didn't want to have the stress of financial reality in the verse - because bills are part of life - so I added the humor.

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Written on August 20, 2022

Submitted by connectallan on June 20, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A Bbcc Aaxx ccdd eexx ffxx xxbB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 886
Words 188
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Clarence Allan Ebert

 · 1952 · Wisconsin

As I mentioned; a Baby Boomer fighting cancer - first colon and now a little in my liver. Been writing poetry for a long time but never more so than during the COVID pandemic. Just trying to remain relevant. more…

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4 Comments
  • myway6119
    I don't have the money to waste.
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • lovingempath
    Welcome to my world Clarence :). At least I'll get a free pass through the 'Pearly Gates': I'm with the band. I sure hope they have a smoking section up there! :). Great poem!
    LikeReply1 year ago
    • connectallan
      Thank you so much. Great comment!!
      LikeReply1 year ago
  • sdizdarevic
    Anyone can relate to this poem -- the rich, the poor, the happy, the sad...it is funny and very true all at once. I love the cleverness of it and the simplicity.
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • myway6119
    I felt he needed the money, and enjoyed the writing.
    Maybe not the best, but worthy of my vote.
    LikeReply1 year ago
    • connectallan
      Thank you for your vote!!
      LikeReply1 year ago
    • myway6119
      I noticed you were a runner up! Congratulations.
      Doesn't help with the bills, I guess?
      LikeReply1 year ago
    • connectallan
      The last time I was runner up I got a coffee mug!! And who say there's no money in poetry? lol
      LikeReply 11 year ago
    • lovingempath
      LOL!
      LikeReply1 year ago
    • myway6119
      high accolades! Not sure if I'll be sucked in again, but that's today's thought. your right I don't think it's a get rich proposition. Cheers.
      LikeReply1 year ago
    • connectallan
      What do you mean by "I won't get sucked in again?"
      LikeReply 11 year ago

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