Primal Cut Mountain



Who could do it but you
Good supply and demand
Let me hold your safe hand
Mountain her cheeks filled the
 highlands what high dividends
His magical built makes her heart
Melt inside two- bookends
 *       *        *        *        *
God- sent the Virgin Islands
Refreshing water two lovers
Well put order
Primal cut is waiting
Life is daring no vows of
swearing
Getting to the top

Restless uninspired
Mountain job he's hired
Heat comes fire- cut- desired
You are both on Island hut
What is the out-put?
Traveling through another time
Primal moment in do time*
Primal cut mountain
Zen for love fountain

About this poem

Just needing the right cut whether its love triangle or simply the highest mountain at your lowest point you climb up to where you need to be

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Written on July 10, 2023

Submitted on July 10, 2023

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Scheme XAAXBXB XXXCXCX DDDXXEEFF
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 609
Words 111
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 15, 9

Robin Carretti

Hello I grew up in the City always loved nature also see the beauty in words. I am caring person married I love yoga to relax at moment. If I can help someone through my writing that means everything to me. more…

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