Prophesy of Inventiom



Prophesy of Invention

Compositions of profound illumination resonating from a prophetic musician
Impositions that compound remuneration as the economists of capitalism demand an inquisition
A tired physician’s diagnosis that confounds all surgical precision
A technician becomes ferocious as he compounds the alternative decision

A silent peaceful protest at the murder of another beautiful black street poet
The tyrant who was voted as the leader of those who don’t know it
King Trident of the ocean rebukes pollution that we throw into it
The vibrant unquestionable devotion of those whose graves we’re inclined to visit

The enduring nature of a statement for the human rights of the underprivileged poor
The alluring stature of the enhancement of those who constantly seek to obtain more
The reassuring amateur statesman who speaks about the truth on the parliamentary floor
The enduring parameters of a great man who sees through what others choose to ignore

The quiet internal vision of an introvert contemplating life
The violet eternal collision of science and religion and what’s right
The pilot in charge of his own volition as he flies our lives out into the night
The harlot beyond our inquisition as she chooses her own body to ignite

Decisions to choose wisdom over instantaneous gratification
Incisions that envision contemporaneous over-saturation
Provisions that aren’t given to poverty’s spontaneous needful configurations
A vision that requires the precision of sub-cutaneous deliberations

My intuition is rarely given the permission to apply itself without indecision
As ammunition is purchased without omission underneath the surface of societial conditions
While those who take time to actually listen aren’t allowed to govern or express their own renditions
As the star constellations glisten more profound than human premonition

The easily influenced gather around the next social media feed
The visible affluence of the latter resound with an incompatible greed
As what’s permissible, like the Mad Hatter, feeds off controversy and need
While the invisible ethics of those who matter are at the ignored base of what the internet tries to heed

We worship egocentric views and hedonistic celebrity lifestyles
While another starship filled with empty clues takes of toward the making of another empire
As the eccentric muse of the simplistic hues give birth to a consumerist type vampire
The bio centric ruse of the scientific news gets dissected around a camp fire

We reach toward the subtleties of complex emotional expression
As we teach the fundamentalities of the context of devotional confession
I shall beseech the congenialities of society without my inclination for condescension
As I reach toward the originalities of the prophetic voices of new invention

The End
Copywright Elizabeth Moroz 2023

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Written on August 17, 2023

Submitted by elizabethmoroz52 on August 16, 2023

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Characters 2,881
Words 476
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2

Elizabeth Moroz

Elizabeth Moroz is an original independent poet, visual artist and musician based in Perth, Western Australia. She is of Ukrainian-Croatian heritage and has a black sense of humour. more…

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