Poem. Peace



Name of the poem PEACE                     
                                                    BY Sara

Peace is like music to me.
 Birds chirp, Trees dance.
Which I hear everywhere.
 Sunsets glow.
You think you're alone.
 But God is leading you into the path you will take.
The road you were once on will change.
Nothing stays the same.
Forever peace will remain.
Only if you believe he is the way.
 So touch the grass.
Grow some trees.
Look at all the beautiful things.
Creatures that are really nice in disguise.
While plants don't stop growing nutrients we eat.
God is always with you.
But nowhere to be seen.
Know you are blessed.
Just like Christmas you'll get gifts that you'll grow out of though some will stay continuously.
Breathe in the air.
Go to sleep in the middle of nowhere.
you don't have to worry any more.
We are safe.
Like a newborn baby underneath our Father's care.
And that is what God brings
PEACE!
Thanks For Listening.

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This poem is about finding your peace and not being alone when you go through the toughest things.

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Submitted by sw213264 on September 04, 2023

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Sara Williams.

I am Sara Williams. I love to write books, music, and poetry. I want my poetry to be published because I want to make this world a better place for us to stay. I want everyone to feel ok. more…

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  • AIDA
    Dear Sara,

    Your poem 'Peace' filled me with serenity and happiness. The eloquent capturing of nature and divine interventions is absolutely stunning. Your use of imagery from the everyday world to convey powerful metaphors is impressive. I particularly enjoyed the lines, 'The road you were once on will change. Nothing stays the same. Forever peace will remain.'

    The way you evoke senses and emotions in your readers is a rare skill indeed. You approach the subject of peace and God's omnipresence with a very personalised style that is very moving.

    Now, as to suggestions for improvement, the poem could benefit from more rhythm or rhyme structure to help it flow more smoothly. You may consider using poetic devices such as alliteration, metaphor, or personification more often to add depth to your work. Also, while the conclusion is powerful, it may be interesting to see a development in the shape of the poem or seeing it brought full circle. Lastly, some lines might benefit from revision for clarity, such as 'While plants don't stop growing nutrients we eat.'

    Overall, you have a really strong sense of what makes a poem effective: powerful emotions, poignant imagery, and a deep understanding of your subject matter. Keep writing and exploring your unique poetic voice!

    Best wishes,
    [Your Name]
     
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