Molue



MOLUE
A trip in this carriage
The shape thereof
The passengers therein
Give a picture of a nation
The land of my birth.

Unity in diversity¡
People of diverse tribes
All brought together
People of diverse tongues
All brought together
People of diverse callings
All brought together
Each group desiring things
Done in its own way.

This noise my brother!
The shouting and the screaming
The grumbling and the complaining
The explosion here and there
Amidst all these
The buying and the selling

Maintenance culture, no!
The old tyres my brother!
The wheel and the gear
Headlamps and trafficators
The chassis and the body
Wearing and tearing each day
Endlessly cry for repair.

Over population too my brother!
At every stop increasing population
This too is a burden
For the carriage is bent
Under the weight of load

Yet it keeps moving
Creaking and jacking all the way
Fight, quarrel, disagreement within
The unity in diversity
Seems not to help matters.

Worry and anxiety too my brother!
The driver at work
Eyes darting here and there
The gain at the end of the day
How to avoid what to deliver
No concentration.

A lot of confusion my brother!
Some shout 'too much speed'
Some cry 'too low speed'
Some shout 'carry go'
Some others 'let him alone.'

Some say not competent
Some the most experienced
Some are indifferent
The unity in diversity
Helps no matter my brother.

Even the conductors
His supposed lieutenants
Help no matter either
Munching and stealing all the way
Some shout 'stop'
Others 'carry go.'

A lot of distraction my brother!
The on-coming vehicles
The reckless overtaking
Horns blaring for no good reason
Pedestrian careless crossing.

The driver in the midst of all these
Created by unity in diversity
Though in serious confusion
Keeps trying his hands on things
He hopes might keep the carriage moving
Though on the rough roads.

Igbekele Ayeni

About this poem

'Molue' is a locally constructed mass transit bus used in Lagos, Nigeria in 1970s to early 2000s. It has been faced out in the recent time with the introduction of luxurious buses by the state government. Each time I took a ride in the bus during my early days in Lagos, the picture I used to see is that of my country Nigeria. This was what inspired me to write this poem and gave it the title, 'Molue.' Through a poetic eye, I see the bus as a symbol of my country, Nigeria.  

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Written on February 10, 2003

Submitted by igbekele_a on August 30, 2023

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Scheme xxxabx cdExEdEfg ehhijh kexdcgi ebbxx hgaCl exigeb emmkx xxxCe lxegxk exhbh jcbfhx
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,870
Words 349
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 6, 9, 6, 7, 5, 5, 6, 5, 5, 6, 5, 6

Igbekele Ayeni

Igbekele Ayeni was born at Ikere-Ekiti, Ekiti State in the Western Region of Nigeria. She had her primary school education at Ebenezer African Church Primary School, Akoniloge, Okekere, Ikere-Ekiti from 1966 to 1971. She attended Aromoko District Commercial Secondary School, Aramoko Ekiti from 1975 to 1979. She had her first degree in English Language at University of Ife, (now Obafemi Awolowo University), Ile-ife in 1986 and her Master’s degree in Literature in English at the University of Lagos, Akoka, Nigeria in year 2004. Igbekele Akomolafe is an experienced teacher. She taught English Language at High School level for many years in Lagos State before she retired as a Director of Education and a School Principal in year 2020 after putting in 31 years of service. She is also a talented creative writer. She has written many short stories, novels and poems most of which are still in manuscripts. ‘Not A Money Matter’ is her first published novel. Igbekele Ayeni is married with children more…

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