Poetic Movement

JESUS BETANCOURT 1955 (New York)



Read my poem to crying babe to feel better
Instead of a lullaby
Soiled diaper was getting wetter
Baby criticizing my poetry was no lie

After changing diaper baby yelled whoa
Said bowel movement my poem was responsible
If I had read some Poe
Critique would've been more horrible

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Written on October 01, 2023

Submitted on October 01, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB CDCD
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 278
Words 50
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4

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