Shhh !

JESUS BETANCOURT 1955 (New York)



Scratchy scattering sounds I'm hearing again
In the dark from above inside the ceiling
Creeping noise that's driving me insane
Goosebumps I am uncontrollably revealing

Shush ! listen it's something crawling
Open eyes spy a pinhole light
Catching spiraling dust that is falling
Obscuring my vision of intruders sight

Blah ! blowing dust away
I heard it disappearing
I'm glad it didn't want to stay
Hope it doesn't plan on returning

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Written on December 05, 2023

Submitted on December 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXA ABAB CACA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 432
Words 71
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4

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  • karlcfolkes
    Had that experience coming from the rafters of the attic of my old house. Lasted several evenings. Never saw the critters but thought it might have been squirrels. Drove me insane.
    LikeReply5 months ago

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