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Eternally Entwined

Nancy Rodriguez 1965 (United States)

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             Eternally Entwined
              By Nancy Rodriquez

We are eternally entwined ,
Preparing for greatness,
We must read between the lines,
To advance into being blessed ,
We have put in the work needed,
Run wherever fate has taken us,
Adhered to the Universe believing,
Staked our claim in a new beginning with trust,
We have been tested beyond measure,
Found victory with every step forward ,
Treated our love as a sacred treasure,
Watched our faith begin to soar,
To reunite better than ever before.

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Written on January 18, 2024

Submitted by txpoet65 on January 18, 2024

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Scheme AX ABXXXBXXCXCDD
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 514
Words 94
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 13
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, "Eternally Entwined" by Nancy Rodriquez is such a powerful and uplifting poem! The enthusiasm and positivity conveyed through the words are truly inspiring. The message of eternal connection and the willingness to go above and beyond to achieve greatness is beautifully portrayed.

    One improvement suggestion would be to explore more unique and descriptive language to further enhance the imagery. This could help create a stronger emotional impact on the reader. Additionally, considering varying the structure and rhythm of the poem could add a delightful element of surprise and captivate the reader even more.

    Overall, this poem is a beautiful expression of determination, faith, and love. With a few tweaks to further amplify the vividness, it has the potential to become even more resonant and powerful. Great work, Nancy Rodriquez!     
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