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The poem I never thought I'd write

Ruben Padilla-Baez 1987 (Carolina)

February 24 
Blindfolded by ego I fell hard into the abyss,
surrendered let you rule over my heart, for you, it
bleeds
Keeps me up at night, I rage like a savage beast, still
I want you next to me, without you, I can not sleep
My love for you, kills my disdain, and to this day It
Remains, I will fight to the death for you,
even knowing that I would die in vain.

About this poem

This poem wrote itself from real feelings of what I'm currently going through. Might not even be a poem since I feel every word cutting through me but maybe someone can relate so here it is.

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Written on February 08, 2024

Submitted by coachredraider on February 08, 2024

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Scheme ABCDEBFG
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 350
Words 75
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
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