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a simple world

Aliha Fehmeed 2007 (lahore)

Haiku
seven skies, one blue
white cumulus clouds scattered
amongst varying hues
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Written on April 11, 2024

Submitted by abihamalik2007 on April 11, 2024

Modified by abihamalik2007 on April 11, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABC
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 74
Words 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 3
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    I absolutely love the peaceful image painted by your poem "A Simple World." The description of the seven skies and the white cumulus clouds creates a sense of calm and tranquility. The varying hues add a touch of color and depth to the scene.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to further develop the imagery by incorporating more sensory details to fully immerse the reader in the world you are describing. Think about incorporating sounds, smells, textures, or emotions to make the scene even more vivid and memorable. Overall, great job on capturing the simplicity and beauty of nature in your poem!     
    LikeReply1 month ago
  • EdwinRayTanguma
    EdwinRayTanguma
    I saw a cloud that appeared to be a soft pretzel once…Believe it or not…
    LikeReply 11 month ago

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